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say that you love me by ~nxoxtxhxixnxg:iconnxoxtxhxixnxg:



one a.m.
and the crickets have stopped chirping.
bright blue on the
phone screen lights up,
as i dial your number.
crying so hard,
i can't see the buttons.
my fingers repeat the pattern,
they once knew so well.
your answer is a tired, angry greeting.
through my tears,
with the knife at my throat,
i ask you,
for three reasons
i should live.
but the truth is...
i'm only looking for one.
©2003-2009 ~nxoxtxhxixnxg
:iconnxoxtxhxixnxg:

Author's Comments

heh i was actually going to do this, but then i decided to write about it instead, and then after i wrote it down, i didnt feel like doing it anymore...

writing is the best release.

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:iconnotrust:
Very chilling, I love the imagery in this...you can almost feel the pain:rose:

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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
:iconnxoxtxhxixnxg:
why thank you... :runs off to check out your gallery:

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"we can't stop here...this is bat country!"
:iconkriasai:
Whoah, that is amazing!
:iconxmiseriacantarex:
I love this :-) It's like I can really feel the way you are in the poem. Good job!
:iconmiseria-cantare:
wow this is amazing. i can relate to what your saying. this is truly a great piece. it demonstartes so well how love can take over your life so nothing else is important. instant +fav
:iconrapturednirvana:
Great emotion and imagry! Def. +fav
:iconshiftie-eyes:
Very good job with this. the imagery makes it seem really real.

gj
:iconlostbluedreams:
Ohh... chilling... the imagery is amazing... as everyone else has pointed out ;)

Nice work! :D

:clap: :clap: :clap:

Dreams~

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~I used to have an open mind but my brains kept falling out... blech.~

My so called work... [link]

Dreams~
:iconnxoxtxhxixnxg:
lol. thats because it is real.

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"we can't stop here...this is bat country!"
:iconshiftie-eyes:
ooo. thats too bad cause the poem was sad...

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